
Sometimes I find that writers need a hint of how to write a complete sentence. Sentences sometimes include the who, what/why, when, and where. If a writer writes a boring sentence such as, “I went to the store.” The teacher might ask, “WHO” went to the store? The writer answers, “ANDREW and ASHLEIGH” went to the store and then the writer changes the sentence. “Andrew and Ashleigh went to the store.” The teacher then might ask the writer, “WHERE is the store?” The writer stops and thinks. The writer changes the sentence some more. “Andrew and Ashleigh went to Walmart.” The teacher continues to ask the writer to think. This time the writer is thinking about WHEN. “When did you go to the store? When did Andrew and Ashleigh go to Walmart?” The writer changes the sentences some more. “Andrew and Ashleigh went to Walmart late last night.” In order to hit the homerun sentence the teacher continues to ask the last question, “What for or why did Andrew/Ashleigh go to Walmart last night?” The writer finishes writing the the sentence. “Andrew and Ashleigh went to Walmart late last night to buy school supplies.”
Set Purpose – As you are writing today remember to include who, what/why, and when in the beginning of your writing.
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